by Thundahack Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:12 am
There shouldn't be a "'" in "Bros", and there should be a period after it. The Fire Flower graphics look really strange, too. The palette is awkward, and it really looked like Samus' ship in a stem for me at first. O_o
It shoud be "See this vine?", not "See this vine.", I don't think there shoudl be a "it" after "climb up" there, and there should be a "," after "Great".
In the screen with two Snifits in a little passage, I don't see the need for the vine. It seems really randomly placed. On the second-to-last screen, that orange could be toned down a bit. And in the last screen, I assume that line is a platform, which looks odd. If it's not a platform, then what is it?
As for the Overworld, the desert portion looks really square, and the cliffs could use some more decoration.
There aren't any more problems.
Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:24 pm by The Oncoming Storm
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